Monday, March 14, 2011

Discussion Topic A

In the inspiring novel, A Thousand Splendid Suns by Khaled Hosseini, Hosseini uses literary elements to explore the issue of domestic abuse. More specifically, he uses elements such as imagery and diction to illustrate the influence domestic violence has on the people involved while also elaborating on the actions that result from those influences. By using these two literary devices the reader is then able to focus in on how the domestic abuse in the novel not only contributes to the formation of the characters throughout the novel, but also how it contributes to the story as a whole.
Diction comes to play when Rasheed exclaims "I swear you are going to make me kill you Laila." The words "swear" and "kill" obviously conotate something of the negative sort, but more particularly these words represent the level of seriousness in the threat he is making. Hosseini uses this threat as a deciding factor in the novel. It is after this threat that Laila realizes that she is truly no longer safe around Rasheed. The game of "love" he had for her is over and now its is simply survival of the fittest. Laila then proceeds to watch what she says and does around Rasheed as well as steal money from him in order to run away.
In terms of imagery, Hosseini uses it in a way that the readers feel as if they are really there, in the room, witnessing Rasheed beat his wives endlessly. In this case all the imagery percieved by the audience is mostly through the eyes of the victims of Rasheed's beatings. It is clear when Laila sees "[Rasheed] turned around all snarling teeth and blazing eyes". This is obviously the image of a relentless monster, not the human that she married. By making Rasheed so inhumane the audience can see the cause of Laila and Mariam's fear. With this the readers are more understanding to why the two women would be so afraid of Rasheed to the point where they want him dead. 
By using the most common literary devices Hosseini shows that domestic abuse is more of a story told by its victims. He allows the readers to see the injustice done through the eyes of Laila and Mariam. One can only believe Hosseini does this as to elicit a response of pity towards the wives and anger towards Rasheed. In doing this the readers then feel no harm done when Mariam proceeds to kill Rasheed. Khaled Hosseini directly shows that domestic abuse can only result in negative events for all parties involved.



11 comments:

  1. J.T, 1st period
    Score:8
    Strength:Great analysis and supporting evidence! You did a nice job constructing your conclusion.
    Weakness:There were some grammatical errors.

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  2. B.R, 1st period
    Score- 6

    Strength- You had great organization, especially since most of us are brain-dead anyways.

    Weakness- You need to cite properly by adding page numbers in parenthesis and you need to address the characters less and talk more about how these elements portray domestic violence.

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  3. V.H., 5th period

    Score: 7

    Strength: Evidence are nicely embedded. Great analysis. Overall organized.

    Weakness: The opening line could be written in a more interesting way(try not to summarize the prompt). Address Mariam's fear too, not just Laila's.

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  4. A.M,5th period

    Score: 8

    Strength: Your evidence and analysis run smoothly :]

    Weaknesses: Just a few grammatical errors, but i know you can fix that :]

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  5. N.K, 2nd period
    Score: 7

    Strength: great analysis and evidence
    Weaknesses: A few grammatical errors, but overall it was great

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  6. A. Obimah 1st period
    7

    Good use of evidence that support your analysis.
    Minor Grammatical errors

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  7. N.Onwunumagha 2nd Period

    Score:6

    Stength:Good Analysis and organization
    Weakness:Very wordy...be more concise

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  8. S. Alfaro 2nd Period


    Score:7

    Strengths:Very good analysis! It really made me feel like you understood the author's intentions.

    Weaknesses: Wow, where do I begin? You need to have better transitions into your paragraphs. It needs to be a smooth paper. I cannot detect any voice from within your writing. You're not a robot right? You had a high number of grammatical errors. Please revise and edit your work. You have time, do not rush. Your writing seems to not have much originality. You must write something to make you stand out from the crowd. I do not recall you focusing on the theme of your writing, or the book. As a student you must get your point across and I feel that you are focusing on other things that do not require as much attention. I'm not sure if that is enough criticism. I hope it is. Good luck on improving your writing.

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  9. C. Nguyen, 1st period

    Score: 7

    Strengths: Very elaborate paper, good evidence
    Weaknesses: Minor grammatical errors and needs more editing on transitions.

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  10. T.Familuyi, 5th period
    Score: 7
    Strength:Great analysis
    Weakness:There were some grammatical errors

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